This is the cover of a copy of David Duncan's second draft. I plan on annotating the script with comments on  story changes and script revisions.
I've barely started the process - just the first couple of pages are currently annotated.
Would you like to join me in this effort? Send comments to me. I can't promise to use them all, but the best will be added and credited to the contributors.
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